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Monday Flash: Very Short Fiction Stars Shine Brightly at VIPs on vsf

Yesterday, I came across Laura Ellen Scott's VIPs on vsf, a blog devoted to "collecting very short thoughts about very short fiction" from some very important people, including (to date) Robert Swartwood (Norton Hint Anthology Editor), Roxanne Gay (PANK), Sean Lovelace (Rose Metal Press Chapbook Winner), Scott Garson (wigleaf ), Ellen Parker (FRiGG), and numerous other luminaries. (continue reading)

Sunday Reflection: Upon Finishing a Flash Fiction Class

So I have to confess, I ended up taking a flash fiction class, because the poetry seminar I wanted to take unexpectedly closed. I write poetry, often formal poetry. While I knew intellectually as part of my MFA program I wanted to get to where I was more comfortable as a writer of prose, I certainly didn't expect to be in the deep end my first semester! (continue reading)

Sunday Micro Fiction: Easter Rabbit Arrives in Time for Christmas

ar-old. We’ve started writing together, and she’s very interested in the amount of words on the page. She counts each word on the screen and says “He’s done it.” He’s written a story under 100 words. Our favorite Young piece is called “Girl” (continue reading)

Sunday Micro: In Your Head

Stephen King, methinks, likened writing to telepathy, the writer transferring what's in his/her head to the reader's. Think of all the micro fiction you've read. What sticks in your head? Why? (continue reading)

Sunday Micro Fiction: Write a Zeugmatastic Piece

My nephew, who finished his first year in a far-off school, sent me a story to read. It had this line at the beginning: "He was an art major, with too much time and glue on his hands." I'm sure he didn't know that he had employed the technique of zeugma—of words, such as time and glue, conjoined by a word or phrase that appears with them, the on her hands. (continue reading)

Sunday Micro Fiction Laughs at the Tiny Details in Nicholson Baker's THE MEZZANINE

I found myself reading portions of Baker's The Mezzanine out loud to whoever passed by my chair—my wife, my son, our new Bichon. Here, you have to listen to this. This guy's talking about earplugs. (continue reading)

Sunday Micro Fiction: Famous and Favorite (Very) Tiny Things

List your famous and favorite very tiny micros here. (continue reading)

Sunday Micro Fiction: Hegel, Diane Williams, and the Impossibility of Satisfaction

The cliché "you can't please everyone" becomes something more complex when the "everyone" expands to include the forces within both the world and us. If indeed satisfying those wills that require satisfaction is impossible, then how does one act in such a world? Such a world forces upon us the need to choose which wills will be satisfied at the same time it denies us the ability to know if our actions will certainly fulfill the chosen will(s). Thus, we act uncertain of whom we must satisfy and what specific actions are required to obtain that satisfaction. Even more frustrating is the possibility that the action that satisfies one force will simultaneously enrage another. (continue reading)

Sunday Micro Fiction: What Unstories Can You Deliver in 140 Characters?

The question too often asked of flash fiction is "Can you deliver a story in so few words" It's an okay question, if that's what you want to do with flash fiction—deliver stories. As the word count lessens and the space constricts, the question seems to remain constant (for some). Even when it gets Twittersized, people focus on the challenge of delivering a story with so few words. Personally, as either a writer or reader, I don't particularly want 140-character stories. I want something else, something uniquely suited for 140-characters, something the world (perhaps) has yet to see. (continue reading)

Sunday Micro Fiction: Of Kings, Queens, and Ron Carlson's "Grief"

Out of this quote comes Ron Carlson's "Grief," a micro fiction piece from The Mississippi Review that is one of my all-time favorites. Your task today is write a piece around 250 words that do what Carlson did with a famous quote about some aspect of the (short) short. Have at it, and let us know how it goes. (continue reading)

Sunday Micro Fiction: Writing the (Very) Short Short in Cartoons

In Saturday's interview, Ramon Collins discussed his entry into the world of micro fiction through cartooning: 

I was a pretty fair men's room newspaper staff artist and cartoonist in Seattle before I started to lose small-muscle control in my hands. To stay involved with the creative act, I started studying, and writing, fiction in 1997. I instinctively was drawn to the Micro craft because I type with one (1) finger and a cartoon is a form of short-short fiction—you don't tell about characters and settings, you show it.

When I first started experimenting with shorter forms, I too entered this world through the cartoon. My cartoons sucked, yes, but I learned a few things about working in compressed forms. (Added later: Because I cannot draw, "cartooning" for me has meant working with graphics I have on my computer, especially those from Ron & Joe.) 

Structure. I titled my cartoons, so the cartoon existed of three parts: (1) title (2) image (3) caption. I learned that titles count, the "worth a thousand words" power of an image, and the importance of nailing that final line (the caption).

Oedipal Conflict Resolved

Synecdoche. It's a figure of speech in which the part stands in for the whole, as in "All hands on deck." Hands (the part) replaces humans (the whole), a substitution that emphasizes an important quality of the whole (in this case, their hands). Synecdochely and famously, Fitzgerald describes Gatsby as a "smile." The so-few words of micro rely on the power of such substitutions, including (perhaps) the central one in which the main figure stands in for some portion (or all) of us.

Stick Figure

Break from the Pack. It wasn't long before I got the structure down that I wanted to break from it, to make my work feel as if it belonged to me and reflected my own sense of form and content. That might mean moving around the parts (title, image, caption), deleting parts, creating new parts, rethinking their purpose, and so on.

Dog Bully

In short, I found, through the cartoon, a creative challenge that appealed (very much) to my desire to discover myself and the world as poets might—through structure, compression, metaphor, and images. Something happens to words when -micro attaches to them—and fiction is no exception. -Micro makes things so very small, yes, but it draws out of each word its essence and its restriction, so that what remains feels strong and resolute: title, image, and a killah of a last line.

Sunday Micro Fiction: And On the Seventh Day, They Wrote (Very) Tiny Things

Each Sunday in the Zoetrope Virtual Studio's Flash Factory office, you'll find a number of its 200+ members responding to either Frank Sullivan's or Richard Osgood's "Five-To-Fifty" challenge: "From these five [prompt] words create a fifty or fifty-five word masterpiece." This past Sunday morning (July 19) at 9:53 Frank posted his five-words chosen at random from the dictionary:

CRACKUP

INTREPID 

OLD-FASHIONED 

ECONOMY 

TAOISM 

Frank ended the challenge with this note to those brave and awake enough to take it on: "Admittedly a strange group of words, but that's what the Muse revealed. Have at it, if you will. Good writing!"

The idea began, Frank says, because "he was looking for a way to motivate people to write. Prompts, in general, do that. It's what The Flash Factory is based on. The 5-To-50 was meant as a quickie. Something that folks may not need to invest so much time in, if they couldn't participate in the longer [writing prompts], but would still get the writing juices flowing."

"The thing I've come to appreciate about the micro form is the economy of words; you need to say what you're saying without any chaff. I find, also, that it oftentimes elicits humor, maybe because of the brevity. It's quick and it's fun!"

Helen Cole

Helen was a crackup. She'd spoof everything from Maoism to Taoism to Communism to Nationalism to Imperialism to Capitalism, all in one politically charged gesture. And she'd make it funny. Drinking an Old-Fashioned, she'd hold court like Gertrude Stein. She was intrepid, and the economy of her words was renown.

— Frank Sullivan

Flash Factoryite Sarah Black, of Bannock Street Books, likens the prompt to "working a puzzle, a jigsaw where you move the disparate pieces into a coherent whole."

For Elizabeth Creith, the micro form appeals to her miniaturist nature."When I was a printmaker," she says, "I did tiny engravings, sometimes an inch square. When I was a potter, I made buttons. When I discovered the fifty-five word flash—which was my introduction to the whole concept of flash fiction—I was delighted. Here was another miniature to learn!"

The "game" aspect of the prompt keeps her coming back for more. "Taking these words and trying to make a story that has the four elements and is entertaining, maybe clever, maybe humourous or memorable. This is not my favourite of the five-to-fifties I've written, but there were phrases in it that struck people as witty and well-crafted, so it's good. When I've thought about it for a few minutes—usually five to ten—I find a way to fit the words together in a theme. There's always a word that doesn't quite fit with the others. This week it was 'crack-up.'"

"Before my meltdown, crackup, whatever," she said, "I tried every faith—Christianity, Judaism, Islam, Taoism, even been a pagan. Ditched 'em all. There's a certain economy in old-fashioned atheism. Now all the god-botherers are after me; ecumenical assassins everywhere. I live undercover, an intrepid apostate."

— Elizabeth Creith

Jim "Nooner" Noonan sees within the micro the challenge of the "tiny canvas and in the case of the FF prompt, the puzzle aspect of rearranging the random prompt words until a story appears—like magic!" He's also discovered "writing exactly to the limit adds to the puzzle-challenge aspect of it."

"Impatience" draws Dawn Allison to the form, that and the challenge of "full story, few words." For her, the micro fiction piece lies somewhere between the fewer words of flash and the "more sense" of the prose poem.

How the Mogul Fell

It wasn’t the economy. Not Taoism, though in stylish New York circles, that’s what they whispered. Easier to believe that he suffered a crackup, that some religious sentiment drew him in, ended his intrepid mission for more. Not for any god did he forsake his wealth, but for old-fashioned love, for an impoverished girl.

— Dawn Allison

That challenge to "create something worthwhile and complete with a minimum of words" also attracts writer Teri Davis Rouvelas. Certainly, each writer brings his or her own sense of purpose to the task also, as in Teri's desire to "see if [she] can draw something from inside [herself] from a list of words."

Need

“We need an economy based on Taoism,” Brad says. His gleaming Intrepid surrounds us like a python.

“You need an old-fashioned blind date,” Maggie had said.

But I'm still dissecting the lyrics to “Stairway to Heaven” in a '76 LTD when my husband's final crackup was a million light tears away.

— Teri Davis Rouvelas

Lately, more often than not, Richard Osgood provides the Sunday prompt. Richard recently traced the history of this Flash Factory activity.

"It all started with an eight-word prompt from Frank selected at random (that part remained consistent throughout) but at that time, it was not to create a fifty word micro but anything one could come up with. The date was December 20, 2006. At that time it was called 'Word Game' and it continued (on and off) until May 2008. As it matured it went from eight words to seven words to six words until, on May 29,, the first challenge to create a fifty-word micro appeared in a thread titled 'Random Richie's Five Word Fiesta.'"

"For me," Rich says, "the goal of fifty or fifty-five words is something that can be accomplished in a day and it’s something anyone in the Factory can do. This is not to say a fifty-word (or fifty-five word) micro is easy to write, because they contain challenges not found in longer work, but like others said, it’s like a puzzle, and why let the New York Times hog the rights to a Sunday puzzle?"

Donia

To crackup the gaze of pity eyes, she rides a chair to Camelot. Intrepid wheels steer an arm-powered course through forgotten, old-fashioned humility. Economy of motion, obstacles broken, burdens shed, a taoism operetta of husbands and sons herald her way through forest and field to romantic interlude everlasting.

— Richard Osgood

It's not only the challenge of writing micro fiction that each participant must rise every Sunday morning to meet, but also that of reading and (gently) critiquing each entry. Each writer/reader brings his or her own aesthetic to a piece. Elizabeth Creith, for example, likes "to see a story, not a vignette or an unplotted poetic musing." She looks for that, and "for correct word use, something that tells [her] the writer either knew the words or looked them up if she didn't." She adds, "Wit, humour, a twist are good, but not necessary."

Jim Noonan "reviews micros, if review is the right word, more for the enjoyment of seeing what someone else did with the prompt words." He feels "it illustrates the power of words to inspire and the diversity of inspiration."

"Textures, senses, flavors" catch Teri Davis Rouvelas's attention as a micro reviewer/reader, as well as "where the writer is taking [her], who they're introducing [her] to, and most of all, does [she] get a sense of fulfillment from the piece, or does it seem more like a beginning or middle."

So what can we all take from the Sunday endeavors of this committed (or soon to be committed) group of micro enthusiasts? I'm so glad you asked! For me, it's their ability to view each writing challenge as wondrous, to embrace process over product, to compete without competition, and to challenge themselves each week to find meaning among five words that, more often than not, have (very) little business hanging out in the same condensed space.

Another Sunday. Another puzzle. This time it's Richard Osgood providing the challenge and the message to all who might take him up on it: "Have fun!"

LINGER

ATELIER

HOURGLASS

TRIBUTE

SCREW

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