Tuesday
I keep waiting for good news. But no one calls. No one knocks on the door. Maybe tomorrow.
We’re all sleepy here in our town. We slog around in the summer heat, waiting for something to happen. At night, I open the window of my furnished room and lie in the heat and hear the town buzzing like a fat, lazy bee.
My friends here lack gumption, lack get up and go. Some went to college, some didn’t, but we’re all stuck in dead-end jobs, or no jobs at all. We hang out at Al’s Pool Hall and all we talk about are girls, but the girls are sick and tired of waiting for us to come out of Al’s Pool Hall and do something with our lives besides drink and play pool.
It was different when Al was still here. He gave us pep talks, told us to go out in the world, to expand our horizons, to find our dream, to do more with our lives than our parents had. If someone was down on his luck, Al was always there to listen. If we were out walking, he’d drive by in his big red pick-up and honk and wave. Just seeing him cheered us up, gave us a sense of purpose. There’s Al, we’d say, let’s go see Al.
On one of his adventures, to a game refuge this time, he sent back pictures and cheerful and inspiring articles for the local newspaper. One night, a lion broke into his tent and clamped Al’s head in its teeth. It dragged him out of the tent and into the brush. But we know that through it all, Al would have kept his upbeat attitude. This happens all the time, he would have told himself. They maul you a little and move on.
We still hang out at the pool hall, but we’re lost without Al. The new manager chews us out if we hang out without spending much or if we get too loud. One night, Al’s sister comes in and walks over to the pool table where we’re playing. They used to live together, brother and sister. She starts crying, so I put my arms around her and hold her and she cries into my chest and tells me I was always one of Al’s favorites.
A couple of days later, there’s an envelope in my mailbox. I open it and there’s a key inside and a message on white unlined paper that says: Al’s pick-up. Take it and go. Find your dream. You’ll need to recharge the battery.
I’m already packing. I won’t leave much behind. Tomorrow I’ll drive Al’s pick-up down to the pool hall. I’ll honk for the guys to come out. No more waiting around. I’m leaving town. Anyone who wants can come with me.
“Down at Al’s Pool Hall” originally appeared in New Flash Fiction Review, autumn 2018.
From Barry Kiterman
January 9, 2019 at 1:49 am
Robert Mcbrearty is one of my favorite writers.
From Don Eron
January 11, 2019 at 7:13 pm
What a treat it always is to come across a McBrearty story, with his unique blend of offbeat humor and understated wisdom. This one is no exception! McBrearty’s is an astute sensibility, irrepressible and bittersweet.
From K. Reilly
January 11, 2019 at 11:49 pm
I’m a fan of McBrearty’s work. He has the ability, even in his short fiction, to give readers a wonderful sense of place, a real glimpse into the consciousness of a narrator who has something to teach us about the importance of paying attention.
From Tom LaMarr
January 12, 2019 at 11:24 pm
Another wonderful McBrearty creation. In his comments about revising the story, the author notes that in “narrowing the focus” he “widened the scope.” I could see this, as his portrayal of life in the pool hall brought an entire town to life. I felt like I knew his characters, not only because we’ve all hung out with them at some point in our lives, but also because the economical story telling was incredibly evocative. I loved the trademark McBrearty humor, as well, was glad to know Al kept held onto his upbeat attitude when dragged from his tent by a lion.
From Tim Hillmer
January 17, 2019 at 4:52 pm
A unique and simple tale that covers so much narrative territory in such a brief series of events. I love the ending and how McBrearty seemingly invites the reader to escape as well and go along for the ride. This piece reminds me of some of my favorite songwriters: Jason Isbell and John Prine. It also echoes Denis Johnson and Fat City. A brilliant little gem.I’ll always go along for the ride with one of McBrearty’s stories.
From Mitzi Mabe
January 31, 2019 at 11:21 pm
I love this story! Well, it’s true I haven’t yet read it–however, given Robert McBrearty’s record as a short story genius, a writing-archer who’s quite mastered his craft, I have no doubt he hits the mark–again. Knowing this work will be another bull’s eye strike from the masterful McBrearty, I’ll read it later when I need a boost. Bravo, Roberto! Keep pulling arrows from the quiver! When you win, your readers do, too.