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What Is Flash Fiction?: Robert Shapard & James Thomas

Yet the [flashes] I loved seemed to go even beyond “mere” inventiveness. They evoked lifetimes and worldsThey evoked lifetimes and worlds… (continue reading)

Flash Craft: Start Following the "Almond Rule" for Story Openings

The reader should know at least much as your protagonist (continue reading)

Flash Fiction Craft: Use POV To Close That Distance in a Flash

Writing third-person pieces that use, as much as possible, the character’s language, then, is one way to speed up the identification process. (continue reading)

Flash Fiction Craft: So What (Exactly) is Brevity in Flash Fiction?

So what is brevity exactly? I don’t know. It’s about getting words to count more than they might in other less-compressed forms. (continue reading)

Munro's "The Bear Came Over the Mountain": Using Summarization to Create Dramatic Dialogue

You, too, can manipulate dialogue through summary and indirect quotation to heighten dramatic effect (continue reading)

Flash Narrative Analysis: Beverly Jackson's "Buddha Gold"

Try to write a flash piece that follows the narrative pattern in Beverly Jackson’s “Buddha Gold.” (continue reading)

Flash Fiction: What Does It Ask of Writers and Readers?

Flash is by nature tight. (continue reading)

Fearless Flash Fiction: Come Talk Phlash in Philly

Philly hosts Conversations & Connections, including a craft workshop on Fearless Flash Fiction. (continue reading)

Flash Fiction Narrative Analysis: Jensen Whelan

When writing a flash piece that is meant to propel a usual situation to the readers in a deeper or unusual way, writers need to be able to use metaphor and juxtaposition along with word choice and diction to make the piece interesting. I came across “How It Was when a Car Caught Fire on the Street outside my House Last Night” by Jensen Whelan in the eleventh issue of Quick Fiction. (continue reading)

Top Five List: Unlike a Pickup Line, a Good Opener in Flash Fiction is Perfectly Acceptable

Here are five tips on great flash beginnings (continue reading)

Flash Craft: Make Me a Name, Pat It and Shape It

Sometimes it’s the small stuff that makes the story noteworthy. The small stuff? What we name our characters, how we handle details within the story, and in what way we add texture coupled with the aforementioned big concepts is the stuff of good flash. (continue reading)

Flash Craft: Five Tips For Sentence Variety and Structure

Whether it’s using repetitious sentences to unify a piece, compressed sentences without excess words, or descriptive sentences that make the piece come alive, your particular sentences are what make up each story. (continue reading)

Flash Craft: Repairing Your Story's Bone Structure after Facial Deficits

Flash Craft: Transform Your Flashes into Must Reads

How do we find new and surprising ways to write about familiar topics like love, loneliness, or rejection? (continue reading)

Flash Fiction Narrative Analysis: Katharine Weber's "Sleeping"

As writers, we should strive to structure our own stories as masterfully as Weber does here. (continue reading)

"Sick as a Dog": Avoiding Clichés in Flash Fiction

One of the most horrifying aspects of reading prose is stumbling upon a cliché. This is even more so in flash, because in shorter pieces where every word counts, clichés “stick out like a sore thumb.” (continue reading)

Flash Fiction Narrative Analysis: "That Reminds Me" by Susan Jackson Rodgers

A flash narrative can be built around any idea, even something as simple as slicing carrots. (continue reading)

Flash Fiction Craft: An Exercise in Trust

Here are some points to consider while trying to fit all that imaginary goodness from your head into that tiny block of space on a page. (continue reading)

Flash Fiction Narrative Analysis: Pamela Painter's "Snap Judgment"

Two dead mice have drowned in the toilet is how Pamela Painter begins her flash story “Snap Judgment” published in Quick Fiction 11. (continue reading)

Flash Craft: Point of View

I will simply note each type of POV, show an example or two, and touch on the strengths and weaknesses of each. (continue reading)

Flash Review: Sudden Flash Youth

A review of SUDDEN FLASH YOUTH, 65 short-short stories, all featuring young protagonists. (continue reading)

Friday Prompt: Anagram Flash

Raga Man is an anagram for anagram. Mr. Mojo Risin? An anagram for Jim Morrison. This flash fiction prompt asks you to unleash the power of the anagram. (continue reading)

Craft: 21 Things I Try To Do in Writing Flash Fiction

A list of 21 aspects of flash fiction, not all flash fiction, but a particular kind. (continue reading)

Teaching: A Rubric for Assessing Critical Writing in a Creative Writing Class

A rubric for grading critical writing about flash fiction and short fiction. (continue reading)

Grade This: A Rubric for Assessing, Teaching, Writing Short Fiction

A rubric for assessing, teaching, and/or writing very short fiction (continue reading)

Flash Craft: Undergraduates Create a Rubric for (Very) Short Fiction

An undergraduate-created list of “strengths” in (very) short fiction. (continue reading)

Craft: Image Patterns in D'Ambrosio's "The Point"

A look at a strategy for creating image patterns using Charles D’Ambrosio’s “The Point.” (continue reading)

The Los Angeles Review's Online Fall Workshops, 2011

A listing of online workshops from The Los Angeles Review. (continue reading)

FF.Net Returns to Campbell's Monomyth, Part IV, The Return

Previous posts took an introductory look at Joseph Campbell’s Monomyth and a more in-depth view of the first and second rites of Campbell’s monomyth, the separation and the initiation. Today, in the third part of the series, the focus turns to the end of stories—and the return. (continue reading)

Campbell's Monomyth, Initiation (Part III in a Series)

Previous posts took an introductory look at Joseph Campbell’s Monomyth and a more in-depth view of the first rite of Campbell’s monomyth, the separation and the initiation. Today, in the third part of the series, the focus turns to the middle of stories—and the initiation. (continue reading)

Writing the Monomyth into the Short Short, Part II, The Inciting Incident

Plot, Peter Brooks argues in Reading for the Plot, is a “form of desire that carries us [readers] forward, onward, through the text” (37). In other words, for plot to work, both readers and characters must be “stimulated from quiescence into a…tension, a kind of irritation, which demands narration.” If plot, as Brooks argues, occurs in both the text and the readers, then the writer must be concerned, not only with inspiring within the character the desire to do something, but also with arousing within the reader the intention to read. Both character and reader sit quietly, yes, but also poised for something to happen. The known world doesn’t do it for them anymore. A deadness pervades the everyday. They’re ready for something to happen—and something does, the inciting incident that demands a story. (continue reading)

Talkin' 'Bout Joe Campbell & The One Way To Write a Story

Here’s what Campbell did. Beginning around 1930, he broke his day into four four-hour periods, of which in three of the four-hour periods, he would be reading stories from all cultures and times. He studied Sanskrit, French, German, Japanese, Old French, Carl Jung, James Joyce, myths, and rites of passage. But mainly he read, hundreds and hundreds of stories, from ancient to modern. In the 1940’s, when he began to write about his decades of reading, you’d think he’d release “Campbell’s 101 Ways to Write a Story.” But he doesn’t. Instead he discovers the Monomyth. The Single Myth. The Lone Way. The One. (continue reading)

Flash Craft: Tragic Urgency in Flash Fiction

The short short, pieces one-thousand words or less, arises as the perfect form to contain such a dynamic—its Dionysian need to end almost before it begins and its Apollonian quest to arrive at meaning before, like lightning, the whole piece disappears—infuses the short short form with tremendous tension, something I call “tragic urgency.” (continue reading)

Thursday Flash Craft: Desire & Narrative Structure in Writing the Short Short

Narrative-based flash pieces tell a story. The basic structure of such a narrative might go something like this: (1) something creates a very strong desire in the character, a desire which creates the need for (2) some kind of action(s) to fulfill this desire, leading ultimately to (3) a resolution/revelation. (continue reading)

Thursday Craft: Flash Is a Machine of Compression

If I had to fill in the blank for flash—flash is a machine of [blank]—I’d say that it’s a machine of compression. What exactly does that mean, then, for the flash writer? (continue reading)

Four Must-Read Steps For Revising Your Flash Fiction

You’ve written some flash, and now, before it’s complete, you must revise in order to get the piece to be the best that it can be, whether you’re looking to submit it for publication, or simply share it with friends and colleagues. (continue reading)

Los Angeles Review Offers An Online Flash Fiction Class

The Los Angeles Review announces an online flash fiction workshop. (continue reading)

Flash Craft: David Aichenbaum on Physical Fiction

My plan was to write a sort of structured mini-essay, carefully laid out. But I chanced upon a few matter-full paragraphs written by Flannery O’Connor (continue reading)

Flash Craft: On Compression; Or How Flash Fiction Changed My Poetry

Writing and reading flash fiction for me ignited possibilities of very sparse narrative, more sparse and stripped down than I would have thought. (continue reading)

Flash Craft: Grohowski Shares His Process for Critiquing

I read a new piece of writing a minimum of three times, from three different points of view: the Reader, the Writer, and the Mechanic. (continue reading)

Six Steps to be a Ninja of (Very) Short Fiction

Short fiction writer Nichole Beard provides six steps to mastering (very) short fiction writing. (continue reading)

Robert Shapard: What is a story, what is a flash?

It’s important to note that all that’s needed to have a narrative, or story, according to the narratologists, is a simple sequence of actions. (continue reading)

Flash Craft: Rethinking Facts (Without Lying)

CNF can share craft elements with its eminently cooler older sibling, like deeper meaning and symbolism (continue reading)

Flash Craft: Six Must Read Tips for Eliminating the Unnecessary

Eliminating the unnecessary might be the single most important aspect of writing an interesting flash. Here are six tips for doing just that. (continue reading)

Flash Craft: Brautigan Provides Clues About Writing Hint Fiction

Brautigan’s short poems strike me as excellent examples of moving, effective hint fiction. (continue reading)

Flash Craft: Getting Abstract With Your Flash

Flash fiction writer Richard Grohowski talks about keys to abstraction in compressed fiction. (continue reading)

Flash Craft: Whitaker Knows How to Keep Readers Satisfied

Flash writer Rachel Whitaker reveals her crafty insights on keeping readers satisfied and appreciative. (continue reading)

Flash Craft: Detailed Plot or Detailed Character?

Jordan Blum suggests a balance of action vs. information when writing flash fiction. (continue reading)

Flash Craft: Throwing Readers Into the Middle

Heather Vann begins her talk about flash in the middle of things. (continue reading)

Flash Craft: Baker Makes History the Driving Force of Flash

Flash Fiction writer, Katie Baker, leans on history for insight, especially when looking at Steve Almond’s story “At Age 91, Anna Smolz of the GmershUnit, Speaks.” (continue reading)

Flash Craft: The Secret Is Out with Rogers' Strategy

The secret is knowing how to be clever in revealing it. Flash writer, Megan Rogers, exposes her secret. (continue reading)

Thursday Flash Craft: Minor Talks Titles

The beginning of and then link to Kyle Minor’s “Where I Get the Titles for My Stories and Essays.” (continue reading)

Flash Craft: Learn About Stringing Together a Collection, from VIPs on vsf

A link post to Tarah Masih’s “How To String Together a Story Collection, from VIPS on vsf. (continue reading)

Thursday Flash: Catch Scott Garson's Front Yard Flash

A reprint, with commentary, of Scott Garson’s “Front Yard on the East Side of Forty-Second.” (continue reading)

Flash Focus: Come Dance with Peter Grandbois at SLQ

The weekly pick at SmokeLong Quarterly: Peter Grandbois with “Dancer.” (continue reading)

Thursday Flash Craft: Synecdoche and the Search for the One

A look at how synecdoche (a form of metaphor, in which the part stands in for the whole) might getting you searching for the ONE in your flash. (continue reading)

Thursday Craft: Flash Fixity Might Cure What Ails You

I first heard the term “fixity” in a poetry class I took with the wonderful Terri Brown-Davidson: “Fixity. What fixity, anyway? Supposedly, it’s the perfect poetic word for the perfect poetic occasion.” (continue reading)

Flash Craft: Lessons from CL Bledsoe's "The Baby"

A reprint and “reading” of CL Bledsoe’s “The Baby,” which originally appeared in elimae. (continue reading)

Flash Craft: Finding Flash in Snippets that Read Like Titles

But lately, I’ve been writing down snippets of talks and conversations, and these excerpts read like titles of flashes yet to be written. Here are some examples from AWP Denver. (continue reading)

Thursday Flash Craft: Your Flash Needs Implication

The more I write flash and come to understand it a bit better, I find that I’m drawn to the need for implication in flash fiction, of ways to imply what flash doesn’t give you the space to make explicit. (continue reading)

Thursday Craft: Let's Discuss Steve Almond's Mini Essay on Plot

Steve Almond gave FlashFiction.Net permission to reprint a craft essay and flash fiction piece from This Won’t Take But a Minute, Honey, described by the following by the Harvard Book Store. This entry focuses on the craft piece on plot gone wrong. (continue reading)

Monday Flash Guest: SmokeLong Quarterly Comes Chock-Full of New Features for the New Decade

The flash fiction journal SmokeLong Quarterly has started a new feature, the Smokelong Weekly.I like this trend of online journals giving us a combination of ever-changing content along with their scheduled issue. SLQ is one of many excellent journals to be found online. Check them out and discover (or rediscover) the brilliance of flash. (continue reading)

Thursday Flash Craft: Compress Your Narrative at FFC

First, here’s my bare bones narrative structure for the short story: Something happens (precipitating incident) to create a desire, and that desire creates a need for action that is thwarted by this and that and this and that until, finally, there’s resolution. Vonnegut’s oft-quoted advice to begin as close to the conclusion as possible works well for flash. Guided by that suggestion, a flash writer might begin with “Finally, there’s resolution.” The writer might find a way to imply the rest—that inciting incident, that series of actions. Or maybe a writer might want it all, the all of the short story structure, and write a compressed version with all the parts in place. (continue reading)

Thursday Flash Craft: Thoughts on Donald Murray's "Rehearsing Rehearsing"

Recently, I read and re-read Donald Murray’s “Rehearsing Rehearsing.” (continue reading)

Thursday Flash Craft: The Jig Is Up When It Comes to Being Tricked by POV

In David Jauss’s alone with all that could happen, he argues that point of view “is perhaps the least understood of all aspects of fiction” (25). According to Jauss, “manipulating distance is the primary purpose of point of view” (58), and he gives a number of examples in support of this novel view of POV. Imagine the trickiness of POV, the impossibility of ever quite grasping it, to no longer be the thing that haunts you. That’s what Jauss does in this chapter of his book on the craft of fiction writing. He solves the mystery of point of view. Once and for all. (continue reading)

Thursday Flash: Jess Bouchard Reviews Carol Guess's TINDERBOX LAWN

In order to read Carol Guess’s prose poetry collection “Tinderbox Lawn,” I had to sit with each piece individually, reading with care, nurturing each word. There isn’t a story that deserves a one-time read or a lazy glance. Her lyrical sentences and provocative imagery explore life with an intensity that leaves the reader just as vulnerable and exposed. Themes of identity, sexuality, and gender pulse on each page—her words breathe. In this book, you’ll be pulled deeply into yourself and wanting to stay in this place. (continue reading)

Thursday Flash Craft: Making the Machinery of Compression Work for Short Short Fiction (Part I)

Recently, in a guest blog at Ethel Rohan’s Straight From The Heart In My Hip (which for some reason my server won’t let me link to), I talked about flash as a machine of compression, an idea I got after reading Douglas Glover’s essay on novel structure, in which he refers to the novel as “a machine of desire.” For me, here are ways that flash machinery might work. (continue reading)

Thursday Flash Craft: Why 10,000 Might Be The Magic Number

Perhaps the element of craft most overlooked is that of writing, that talent some writers have that allows them to write more than the rest of us, to put in the time needed to get good, better, and (possibly) great. (continue reading)

Thursday Flash Craft: Five Can't Miss Ways to Avoid a Reader's "So what?"

So, have at it. Work your magic so instead of saying, “So what?” after reading your flash, we are saying, “By George, I think I’ve got it!” Or something like that. (continue reading)

Thursday Flash Craft: Tell Readers What They Want To Know

Thursday Flash Craft: 9 Surefire Ways to Get Your Flash Fiction Accepted

Recently, for the wonderful Los Angeles Review , I wrote a blog entry, “Something About Rejection.” Here’s a companion piece, something about acceptance. From 2004-2009, I served as an editor with SmokeLong Quarterly , by the end reading as many as 400-500 submissions per month. So part of this advice comes from my editorial experience and part comes from my own submission/acceptance history and most is, as one might expect, a best guess. (continue reading)

Thursday Craft: A Critical Essay on Gesture in Fiction

Two things simultaneously occur in this passage: (1) Reuben cleans his first goose; and (2) Reuben and his sister Swede converse about her running away from the goose and, later, their brother Davy’s gal getting beat up by two boys in the girls’ locker room. The juxtaposition of these two actions—much like Coppola’s parallel cutting between Michael’s consecration as his nephew’s godfather and his family’s killing of all the Corleone enemies—creates a tension between the two actions, thereby not only creating a rich, complex meaning but also more deeply engaging the reader in the moment. (continue reading)

Thursday Craft: Thinking about Flash Fiction after Talkin' With David Wroblewski

David Wroblewski came to Rosemont College to talk to the graduate publishing, literature, and creative writing students and faculty about the book, the book tour, writing, and what’s next. He was generous, insightful, thoughtful, and all-together terrific. (continue reading)

Thursday Flash Craft: Six Ways to Write for Emotional Resonance

Write a flash that is “hard” for you to write, one that (1) uses a strong, traditional narrative drive to (2) confront something that you (as writer) are trying to figure out (3) so that you are forced to face some deeper, darker emotional truths (4) by putting your POV character through a series of actions (5) leading to (for writer, reader, character) an ending with emotional resonance (continue reading)

Thursday Craft: Eleven Essentials of Writing Great Flash Fiction

And here are The Eleven Essentials to Writing Great Flash Fiction. (Coincidentally, these are the eleven things I try to do when writing flash fiction) (continue reading)

Thursday Flash Fiction Craft: So Much Depends Upon the Title

Thursday Flash: Toward a (Very) Tiny Definition

Eric McKinley @ FlashFiction.Net: Flash Density

I entered a flash fiction course thinking I knew what flash fiction was. Wrong. See, I thought flash fiction meant short, short stories. A fully realized short story that just happened to be small in size but not in stature. (continue reading)

Thursday Flash Craft: Talking Dialogue

In his “Writing Realistic Dialogue and Flash Fiction,” Harvey Stanbrough writes the following: If your purpose is to draw your reader into your world for the duration, everything you put on the page—every word, every sentence, and every bit of punctuation—must be placed with a thought for how it will affect the reader. All other considerations are secondary (46). (continue reading)

Thursday Craft: The Monomyth in Munro (Part VI in a Series)

In Alice Munro’s story “The Lives of Girls and Women,” a young girl Del confronts the organizing principles of the people in the Canadian small town of Jubilee. Religion, neighbors, sex, marriages, gender, love, social mores—all these throw obstacles in the way of Del as she seeks to grow into womanhood. The story begins with Del’s search for glory in her small town, and that search for glory becomes connected to sex, as she finds a “sex” book belonging to Del’s friend Naomi’s mother. Mr. Chamberlain, a male friend of a boarder in Del’s house, gropes Del, leading to further encounters with Mr. Chamberlain. Del returns from these encounters, that journey into chaos, with a new understanding of sex, of men, of the type of woman Fern desires to become. (continue reading)

Thursday Flash Craft: The Monomyth in Joyce's "Araby"

This final entry in the Monomyth looks at James Joyce’s “Araby” and how the monomyth works to both structure the story and provide its meaning. (continue reading)

Thursday Flash Craft Returns to Campbell's Monomyth, Part IV in a Series

Previous posts took an introductory look at Joseph Campbell’s Monomyth and a more in-depth view of the first and second rites of Campbell’s monomyth, the separation and the initiation. Today, in the third part of the series, the focus turns to the end of stories—and the return. (continue reading)

Thursday Flash Craft: Campbell's Monomyth, Initiation (Part III in a Series)

Previous posts took an introductory look at Joseph Campbell’s Monomyth and a more in-depth view of the first rite of Campbell’s monomyth, the separation and the initiation. Today, in the third part of the series, the focus turns to the middle of stories—and the initiation. (continue reading)

Thursday Flash Craft: Using Doom, Tragedy, and Hegel to Write (Short) Short Fiction

Writers who have their characters create their own doom end up with a story far more complex and interesting than those that use Fate to drive the narrative into existence. (continue reading)

Thursday Flash Craft: Writing the Monomyth into the Short Short, Part II, The Inciting Incident

Plot, Peter Brooks argues in Reading for the Plot, is a “form of desire that carries us [readers] forward, onward, through the text” (37). In other words, for plot to work, both readers and characters must be “stimulated from quiescence into a…tension, a kind of irritation, which demands narration.” If plot, as Brooks argues, occurs in both the text and the readers, then the writer must be concerned, not only with inspiring within the character the desire to do something, but also with arousing within the reader the intention to read. Both character and reader sit quietly, yes, but also poised for something to happen. The known world doesn’t do it for them anymore. A deadness pervades the everyday. They’re ready for something to happen—and something does, the inciting incident that demands a story. (continue reading)

Thursday Flash Craft: Image Patterns, Repetitions, Motifs, and How They Can Make You Deep & Literary & All That Stuff

Image patterns play a particularly strong role in supporting the plot of flash fiction. For example, as I drafted a flash piece about a germaphobic woman confronting a worker who has crapped on her lawn, the image of dirt, of waste, a brownness popped up here and there, like a symbol of a wasted land. (continue reading)

Thursday Flash Craft: Desire & Narrative Structure in Writing the Short Short

Narrative-based flash pieces tell a story. The basic structure of such a narrative might go something like this: (1) something creates a very strong desire in the character, a desire which creates the need for (2) some kind of action(s) to fulfill this desire, leading ultimately to (3) a resolution/revelation. (continue reading)

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